Thursday, March 23, 2017

WALT read our opinion writing to an audience

This week we wrote a persuasive writing piece about whether Mrs Wallace should let us eat Oreos in class.
We read our writing to an audience....... 




and then we got to eat some Oreos!







2 comments:

  1. Hi its Divontae from south hornby schoool i like this post but next time show they are eating i know what there eating they are oreos. yummy

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  2. Hi Mrs Wallace and students
    I like how you told us what you are persuading Mrs Wallace about and I guess your persuasive writing worked well done
    I remember my class writing a persuasive story about letting us do something like that but we did not do it about food
    Next time you could put a little bit of peoples persuasive writing so also the viewers of your blog can see how Mrs Wallace got so persuaded
    By Armika Papakura Central School Rm 5

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