Tuesday, August 8, 2017

WALT write our opinion and back it up with reasons and examples

We are learning to write about our opinions.
The question posed this week is Should kids be allowed a TV in their bedroom?
There was some great discussion about this, with an equal amount for and against.
Here are some students opinions about the topic.


Should kids be allowed a TV in their bedroom?

I think that kids shouldn't be allowed to have a TV in their bedroom.
Kids shouldn't have a TV in their room because they might watch TV late. They might lose track of time and miss lots of working time.
Secondly, they might watch TV too much and it might change their mood.They will get angry at their family for nothing.
Thirdly, they might watch the wrong things.
Because they will be in their rooms by themselves they might watch  inappropriate programmes.

That’s why I think  kids shouldn't be allowed to have a TV in their bedroom.

by Ocean-Lee



Should kids have a TV in their bedroom?


I'm confident kids are not allowed a TV in their bedroom.


Kids should not be allowed a TV in their room because they might miss a day of school


First of all, you might stay up long at night watching or playing on the TV and you will get tired and sleep in and possibly miss school.


Next you might get light headed.
Because you have been staring at the TV for too long. Then you won't feel well.


Finally you might have an argument about what game to play.
You and your friend will have an argument and your friendship possibly break and you won't be friends.

In conclusion I strongly believe that kids should not have a TV in their bedroom.

by Te Kawana

Should kids have a TV in their bedroom?

I am confident that kids shouldn’t have a tv in their room.
Kids shouldn’t have tvs in their room because they will become game freaks.
If you have a tv in your bedroom you’ll play games watch tv then you will become obsessed with it.
Secondly it could make them wake up all grumpy.
If they don’t have enough sleep then they will be all mad and grumpy because they are tired.
Thirdly they won’t get to spend some time with their family.
If they keep on playing the games and watching movies they won’t be able to spend some quality time with their family.
This is why I strongly believe that kids shouldn’t have tv’s in their rooms.

by Twinkles


1 comment:

  1. i like your writing and it looks awesome Danielle.

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